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Where I'm At by rayray-152 Where I'm At by rayray-152
Well I've always wanted to do a concrete poem because they just look so fun. :dummy:

It's supposed to be shaped like a heart- it does for the most part, but it's a bit off... you can't really type concrete poems in dA because (as I know of) you can't center the text. I tried three times to get it to work and it didn't, so i made it an image. I do quite like how this turned out though, despite it seeming kinda random to me. ^^;

But enough of my blabbing on, the main focus here is *PrinnyWarrior. He is the love of my life, my whole existence. I don't know what I'd do without him; he saved me. The world is so much brighter with my Sweetie, and even if we're miles apart, I'll always be in his heart. (Rhyming words ftw!)

I love you baby, forever and ever. :)
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:iconloks7:
Loks7 Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2011  Student Writer
I really love it, good work
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:iconrayray-152:
rayray-152 Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
thank you :meow:
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:iconloks7:
Loks7 Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2011  Student Writer
haha your welcome :)
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:iconfenderguitar55:
FenderGuitar55 Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
So simple, yet so tender. I love this!
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:iconrayray-152:
rayray-152 Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
thanks :)
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:iconi-am-kalu:
I-AM-KALU Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2011  Student General Artist
It's lovely, reminds me on times i felt like this.
Makes me wanna.. believe again.
Thanks a lot.
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:iconrayray-152:
rayray-152 Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
^^;
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:iconwhite-tigress-12158:
white-tigress-12158 Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2011
so simple, so true, so beautiful.
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:iconyellowflamingo25:
YellowFlamingo25 Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2011
Oh my God... words cannot describe how much I adore this <3
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:iconrayray-152:
rayray-152 Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
^^ thank you
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:iconneutrinoxz:
NeutrinoXZ Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2011
Your poem 'Where I'm At' is beautiful I'd love to feature it on [link] = PoeticPictures

Would you be interested?
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:iconrayray-152:
rayray-152 Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
^^ Thanks, but no thanks. :)
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:iconmruki:
mruki Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
This is sweet, I love the :heart:
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:iconrayray-152:
rayray-152 Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
thanks :)
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:iconvielblackheart22:
VielBlackheart22 Featured By Owner May 31, 2011
It's wonderful makes me want to cry
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:iconrayray-152:
rayray-152 Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
aw thanks :)
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:iconvielblackheart22:
VielBlackheart22 Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2011
No prob^^
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:iconpinkbluerose:
pinkbluerose Featured By Owner May 31, 2011
meaningful and very good job!
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:iconrayray-152:
rayray-152 Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
thank you ^^
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:iconrofeex:
rofeex Featured By Owner May 31, 2011  Student Interface Designer
i really like it niiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiCe words
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:iconrayray-152:
rayray-152 Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
thanks :)
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:iconsandwhisper:
Sandwhisper Featured By Owner May 30, 2011  Student General Artist
This is so sweet! This is pure love, which is overlooked a lot lately in this world of abuse and sick people... but this warmed my heart.
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:iconrayray-152:
rayray-152 Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
awww thanks :)
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Sandwhisper Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2011  Student General Artist
You're welcome. :)
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:iconmottymano:
mottymano Featured By Owner May 30, 2011
Very nice and very sweet!
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:iconrayray-152:
rayray-152 Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
thanks :)
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:iconzeusoftheallmighty:
ZeusoftheAllmighty Featured By Owner May 30, 2011   Traditional Artist
This is beautiful, concreat poems do look fun.
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:iconrayray-152:
rayray-152 Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
thank you, lol they are
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:iconstile212:
stile212 Featured By Owner May 30, 2011
this is beautiful
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:iconrayray-152:
rayray-152 Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
thank you ^^
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stile212 Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2011
np
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:icon123carebear456:
123carebear456 Featured By Owner May 30, 2011  Student Digital Artist
aw this is so beautiful ! i love how you made it into a concrete poem <3
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:iconrayray-152:
rayray-152 Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
:) thank you
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:iconiama3dpuzzle:
IamA3Dpuzzle Featured By Owner May 30, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
pure beauty!!!
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:iconrayray-152:
rayray-152 Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
^^ aw thanks
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IamA3Dpuzzle Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Your Very Very Welcome!!!
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:iconsunxjune:
SunxJune Featured By Owner May 30, 2011
Really beautiful text !
I love ;)
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:iconrayray-152:
rayray-152 Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
thank you lol
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SunxJune Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2011
You're welcome ;p
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darkness846 Featured By Owner May 30, 2011
amazing
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:iconrayray-152:
rayray-152 Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
thanks :)
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darkness846 Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2011
welcome :)
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:icon10binary:
10binary Featured By Owner May 30, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
A text heart. We need more cool things like that on DA.
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:iconrayray-152:
rayray-152 Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
lol i agree :)
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:iconhillarylovemetalrock:
hillarylovemetalrock Featured By Owner May 30, 2011  Student General Artist
love, love, love
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:iconrayray-152:
rayray-152 Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
^^ thank you
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:iconnaminexkairi225:
NamineXKairi225 Featured By Owner May 30, 2011  Student Digital Artist
This reminds myself of me and my boyfriend. He's not around anymore for now and every night and day I think about him and how we'll be together again soon.
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:iconrayray-152:
rayray-152 Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
that's what i think about every night :)
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:iconnaminexkairi225:
NamineXKairi225 Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2011  Student Digital Artist
so glad I'm not alone n.n
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:iconlunas-brightlight:
lunas-brightlight Featured By Owner May 30, 2011
Super sweet! :D
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